Writing — a paragraph about a hobby

1段落・約70語(6文)  ·  he / his を必ず使う  ·  下の見本は72語

この課題は何か

やること趣味について 1段落 書く。ただし he / his / she / her を使うので、自分ではなく「その人」の趣味として三人称で書く(ペアの相手の趣味を書く形)
分量約70語 = だいたい 6文(1文10〜12語)。段落なので改行しないで一かたまりで書く
中身Statement 1文 + Supporting 4文 + Concluding 1文
必須① he / his を使う  ② 最後は For these reasons, で締める
先生の例Jielin’s hobby is going to museums alone → なぜ美術館か/彼女の一番好きな美術館/なぜ一人か/ガイドへの姿勢 → For these reasons…

型(スライドの通り)

Statement(1文で結論)→ Supporting × 4(Reasons / Descriptions / Comparisons)→ Concluding(For these reasons…)

見本(瑠希の趣味・三人称)

Statement

Ruki’s hobby is making apps with AI.

瑠希の趣味はAIでアプリを作ることです。

Reason

He likes AI because it helps him make things he could not make alone.

AIが好きな理由は、一人では作れないものが作れるからです。

Description

For example, he made an app that shows where his friends are during a trip.

例えば、旅行中に友達の居場所が分かるアプリを作りました。

Comparison

He likes it more than games, because his friends really use it.

ゲームより好きです。友達が本当に使ってくれるからです。

Description

When they tell him it is useful, he feels very happy.

「便利だよ」と言われると、とても嬉しくなります。

Concluding

For these reasons, making apps with AI is the best hobby for him.

こうした理由から、AIでアプリを作ることが彼にとって一番の趣味です。

相手のことを書くとき(穴埋め)

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For these reasons, is the best hobby for him/her.